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Hexagonal windows,
stretched and split but never
broken,
chip away at
the sky. Broad and dark
patches of our world's flaking outer skin
connect the dots but never
complete
the
puzzle---
glue back together the silver shards
of sanity disrupted
by a change in season.
The months of thermonuclear friction
pollute the innocent but never
separate
the conscious from the light of this world.
Incandescent suns keep track of the days but never
embed morals to their binary orbit.
The solar calendar,
a cluster of mesh bronze
Ensnares but never
stiffles the movements of the universe's needle
threading together
the fibers of the contellations, fused and exploring
beneath the heavenly sphere.
stretched and split but never
broken,
chip away at
the sky. Broad and dark
patches of our world's flaking outer skin
connect the dots but never
complete
the
puzzle---
glue back together the silver shards
of sanity disrupted
by a change in season.
The months of thermonuclear friction
pollute the innocent but never
separate
the conscious from the light of this world.
Incandescent suns keep track of the days but never
embed morals to their binary orbit.
The solar calendar,
a cluster of mesh bronze
Ensnares but never
stiffles the movements of the universe's needle
threading together
the fibers of the contellations, fused and exploring
beneath the heavenly sphere.
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Alright. So the story behind this poem is that I was asked to figure out the metaphor of my own writing. I'm currently in the process of writing a collection of poems called "The Light Side of the Dark" and basically, my writing has always concerned finding the light in every situation, pulling the beauty from the ugly. One cannot truly enjoy the beauty of something unless there is an underlying ugliness to it. And so my writing reflects the light of even seemingly dark situations in life.
Since my project was to find a metaphor for this, I decided to go with constellations as my metaphor. In life, everybody has ups and downs in their daily living. So I considered how constellations are the connection of stars in the sky. Between every star, however, there are patches of darkness, which represent the everyday trials and tribulations we must face. You go through dark times and you go through light times. That's just the way of life. So I thought the constellation the perfect metaphor to what my writing is trying to get at.
It's both dark with a negative undertone. But the negative is meant to bring out the positive in this poem, which I hoped would bring about a nice balance of light and dark themes. Make what you want of the rest of it. Because it really is up to the reader to decipher poems for him/herself. The overall meaning will be interpreted however you people see fit to interpret it. =3
Since my project was to find a metaphor for this, I decided to go with constellations as my metaphor. In life, everybody has ups and downs in their daily living. So I considered how constellations are the connection of stars in the sky. Between every star, however, there are patches of darkness, which represent the everyday trials and tribulations we must face. You go through dark times and you go through light times. That's just the way of life. So I thought the constellation the perfect metaphor to what my writing is trying to get at.
It's both dark with a negative undertone. But the negative is meant to bring out the positive in this poem, which I hoped would bring about a nice balance of light and dark themes. Make what you want of the rest of it. Because it really is up to the reader to decipher poems for him/herself. The overall meaning will be interpreted however you people see fit to interpret it. =3
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I can only say simply beautiful!!!